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Bailey Holcomb

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Drop Of Life

    I liked it, Sarah. The thing that I didn't find was the rhythm. I might be wrong, but when I read it, I didn't find it. Who is she ? ...

    Mar 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Kiss

    Honestly, I liked it. I love repetition and imagery. In the first stanza, you made me feel like I was in the move Alice In Wonderland . I loved that. ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Secret Place

    I liked this poem! Very well written I must say! To me, it seems a little mysterious. That is what I like in a poem. A dramatic, mysterious, cautious type ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Snow

    I love the repetition and the similes! VERY GOOD! I love the free verse and the "swamp mud" I think is what you said. I love it! I wish I ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Darkness

    I personally really like this poem. It isn't what I often read and it shows a lot of feeling. It seems really dramatic, but in a very fascinating way. I ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Forever

    Hey! This is good. I like the free verse in it and I honestly wish I could write such details as these! I am trying new things because quatrains tend ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: You Are Loved

    Okay. Iam not exactly sure what to critique in this poem. I'm so sorry. Ihave not learned a lot about how to correct little things in every poem. I wish ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You're wrong, Teacher.

    Okay I liked this. I'm sorry, but I don't know the meaning to have of the words you have used. Which, really that should be a compliment because I have ...

    Dec 17, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The One I Love

    Hello. I loved your poem. It was sooooo sweet!!! I often write about guys, well, a certain guy, that I have gone out with. I recently started writing and yet ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter one of my werewolf story (need title)

    I know it may not seem like it, but I wrote this poem a while back. "My Love For You" was written when we were still together and I was ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: If I Had Another Drink

    I liked your poem. It made sense and yet you didn't give too much information. That is mainly what I do. I look in the mirror and start talking and ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Do You?

    Thank you for your feedback. Now the reason I don't always tell exactly what is going on is that I don't want to tell a lot about it most of ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: through it all

    I may be one of the few people [ or so it seems] to review this poem. Even though this may be true, I like it very much so. It ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Just The Way I Like It

    Wow! I can't believe that! That is an amazing point of your opinion. It is unusual that I read things like these. Although I like my stanzas, I like your ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Him

    I liked your poem. It's pretty. Short, but Pretty. I usually write poems based on guys [well a certain guy that ,stupidly, I dumped.] and they end up turning out ...

    Dec 16, 2008


That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)